Monday, July 16, 2012

Smile! :)

                                             
                 

           A tragedy it is. The Romeo and Juliet. But for now, why don't we try making the ending a funny one. After feeling grief the Montague and Capulet had, why don't we make the readers happy at the end. In that case, we'll see all the smiles the readers could have.
              This is how my comic relief starts.Romeo went to the apothecary. The apothecary did not notice that he gave a wrong vial. Romeo not knowing that the vial was not a poisonous one still accepted it. Romeo went to Juliet. He drank the vial but he was curious because he was still alive. Juliet woke up. The time Juliet woke up, Romeo felt something different within his body. He started having a diarrhea. The bad smell occupied the whole place. Even Balthasar outside can smell the very very poisonous air of Romeo. Juliet was very shocked. "My dearest Romeo, why are you like that? What happened to you?" she said. Then Juliet kissed and hugged Romeo despite of the bad smell. Romeo was not able to speak any more nor say any word for he is hurrying to carry out and bring out what he is hiding inside.
            Poor Romeo who had the wrong vial. :))
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